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Title: Wrote a new short story this week . . . Post by: indianasmith on May 02, 2016, 11:20:33 PM And posted it on my blog. Read it, and tell me what you think!
(Please) http://lewisliterarylair.blogspot.com/ (http://lewisliterarylair.blogspot.com/) Title: Re: Wrote a new short story this week . . . Post by: Allhallowsday on May 03, 2016, 05:21:15 PM Just barely started on it, but was struck with this line: " Men like his son, who would be joining him shortly. "
Hard to read stuff online these days, but I'll try to finish. Keep up the good work, it's interesting. Title: Re: Wrote a new short story this week . . . Post by: indianasmith on May 03, 2016, 06:17:11 PM Thanks, AHD. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story when you get a chance.
(Um - did that line strike you in a good or bad way??) Title: Re: Wrote a new short story this week . . . Post by: Allhallowsday on May 06, 2016, 02:17:18 PM Thanks, AHD. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story when you get a chance. Until I read the whole story I can only say I think I know where you'd go with such a story and that line, presumably simply functional, may also be a foreshadow. (Um - did that line strike you in a good or bad way??) |