Wrote a new short story this week . . .

[indianasmith]

And posted it on my blog.  Read it, and tell me what you think!


(Please)



http://lewisliterarylair.blogspot.com/

[Allhallowsday]

Just barely started on it, but was struck with this line: " Men like his son, who would be joining him shortly. " 
Hard to read stuff online these days, but I'll try to finish.  Keep up the good work, it's interesting. 

[indianasmith]

Thanks,  AHD.  I hope you enjoy the rest of the story when you get a chance.


(Um - did that line strike you in a good or bad way??)

[Allhallowsday]

Thanks,  AHD.  I hope you enjoy the rest of the story when you get a chance.


(Um - did that line strike you in a good or bad way??)

Until I read the whole story I can only say I think I know where you'd go with such a story and that line, presumably simply functional, may also be a foreshadow.