It's not as easy as you might think . . .
https://lewisliterarylair.blogspot.com/2021/03/creating-perfect-hamilton-blurb.html
Your beta reader is dense, those are good blurbs.
What if the most famous duel in history . . . Had ended differently?
Quote from: Allhallowsday on March 13, 2021, 10:55:38 PM
What if the most famous duel in history . . . Had ended differently?
That tag line just didn't work for me. I liked the final version better.
Quote from: indianasmith on March 14, 2021, 01:42:37 AM
Quote from: Allhallowsday on March 13, 2021, 10:55:38 PM
What if the most famous duel in history . . . Had ended differently?
That tag line just didn't work for me. I liked the final version better.
The one I quoted struck me because it sums up your concept quickly; however, the final is better.