Curious if anyone wanted to give feedback to something I've been writing.

[macabre]

hi
No problem Dave,I wrote that short story for my wife,it was kind of a bet. My wife is an avid reader and she devours books on vampires and the like.Please do not expect that particular story to be any good ,i just wanted to try a different angle with the vampire story, how is your story doing?
many thanks..
macabre

[daveblackeye15]

Er, didn't I send you a bit of the story? Like two pages just as feelers.

[daveblackeye15]

Well even though no one has gotten back to me on what I've sent so far I'm starting to get over my 50 page writer's block I think.

[Skull]

Just keep plowing away and jump a few chapter, you should have other interesting parts of you're story that you didnt cover yet...

[macabre]

hi
Sorry Dave i did not receive your email with your story,no idea why but anyway here is my email: Karloff_Frankenstein@yahoo.co.UK.

good luck with your story,

[daveblackeye15]

It says there's something not quite right about your email, is there anything i should be adding that should be obvious to anyone else?

[macabre]

hi
For some reason it does not highlight that between the words karloff and frankenstein there is a lower casing, sorry about that,

[daveblackeye15]

Sorry Mac but I tried several combos and it still says something is wrong with the name.

Do you have an alternate email? Assuming you haven't decided to give up on me.