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Coming up with a perfect blurb!

Started by indianasmith, March 13, 2021, 10:55:27 AM

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indianasmith

March 13, 2021, 10:55:27 AM
"I shall smite you in the nostrils with a rod of iron, and wax your spleen with Efferdent!!"

ER

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March 13, 2021, 12:47:35 PM
Your beta reader is dense, those are good blurbs.
What does not kill me makes me stranger.

Allhallowsday

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March 13, 2021, 10:55:38 PM
What if the most famous duel in history . . . Had ended differently?
If you want to view paradise . . . simply look around and view it!

indianasmith

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March 14, 2021, 01:42:37 AM
Quote from: Allhallowsday on March 13, 2021, 10:55:38 PM
What if the most famous duel in history . . . Had ended differently?

That tag line just didn't work for me.  I liked the final version better.
"I shall smite you in the nostrils with a rod of iron, and wax your spleen with Efferdent!!"

Allhallowsday

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March 14, 2021, 01:19:47 PM
Quote from: indianasmith on March 14, 2021, 01:42:37 AM
Quote from: Allhallowsday on March 13, 2021, 10:55:38 PM
What if the most famous duel in history . . . Had ended differently?

That tag line just didn't work for me.  I liked the final version better.
The one I quoted struck me because it sums up your concept quickly; however, the final is better.
If you want to view paradise . . . simply look around and view it!
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