Oakwood Slasher II trailer

[diamondwaspvenom]

It's finally here after about a one day delay. This time, it's more like a trailer:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MOzK71TVG7E

What do you guys think of it?

(For those who are curious, I played the killer).

[indianasmith]

 An excellent first effort!  Needs more blood, and some cleavage.

[JPickettIII]

I like it.  Well done. I agree there needs to be more clevage.

Later,

John

[dean]

I like it.  Well done. I agree there needs to be more clevage.

Later,

John

There is almost nothing in life that cannot do with more cleavage!

[diamondwaspvenom]

When looking back at the videos that I've made, I have to say that this is my least favourite. The first two trailers, although simply made, had some eerie feeling to them. This one however.....ugh.

Although I'm proud of the opening, it's still not enough to change my dislike for the trailer. The music was really kinda cheezy and too simplistic. I know it's not supposed to be scary, but I find that I kinda look like a moron running around with the pillow case on my head. Most of all: I HATE the way my voice sounds in the narration of the video (Yes, it's my voice only with the pitch lowered, though it's my fault that it sounds that way.)

I REALLY think I can do better than this. 

[vanlutz]

For your age it's pretty good. The only thing I'd say is the edit where he's stabbing the knife forward, have the knife go completely out of view.