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I finished a new short story!

Started by indianasmith, December 18, 2023, 01:26:09 PM

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indianasmith

Just in time for Christmas, I offer this quaint and slightly creepy tale for your enjoyment:

https://lewisliterarylair.blogspot.com/2023/12/a-new-short-story-for-christmas.html
"I shall smite you in the nostrils with a rod of iron, and wax your spleen with Efferdent!!"

zombie no.one

cool story  :thumbup:

I was def picturing Mr Cain as Peter Cushing in my head

liked the sneaky bad movie reference  :teddyr:
Quotethe movie was cringe, corny, cheesy and "what the biscuits" is with this atrocious acting and childish corny thing of a movie???

indianasmith

Quote from: zombie no.one on December 18, 2023, 02:10:46 PM
cool story  :thumbup:

I was def picturing Mr Cain as Peter Cushing in my head

liked the sneaky bad movie reference  :teddyr:

Thanks much! 
"I shall smite you in the nostrils with a rod of iron, and wax your spleen with Efferdent!!"