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Wrote a horror story yesterday . . .

Started by indianasmith, June 11, 2024, 12:31:05 PM

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indianasmith

And published it on my blog this morning!
Give it a read and tell me what you think.

https://lewisliterarylair.blogspot.com/
"I shall smite you in the nostrils with a rod of iron, and wax your spleen with Efferdent!!"

pacman000

Good. Gave me chills. But not too realistic; Buc-ee's bathrooms are so large there's never a line. :wink:
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indianasmith

Quote from: pacman000 on June 19, 2024, 09:01:40 AMGood. Gave me chills. But not too realistic; Buc-ee's bathrooms are so large there's never a line. :wink:

I have seen a line for the lady's room at Buc-ee's.  Never on the men's side, though.
"I shall smite you in the nostrils with a rod of iron, and wax your spleen with Efferdent!!"

pacman000

Quote from: indianasmith on June 19, 2024, 07:24:12 PMI have seen a line for the lady's room at Buc-ee's.  Never on the men's side, though.
Then I must pay more attention. :)
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