tune im working on...

[zombie no.one]

a drum&bass tune Im in the process of making. not finished yet but some feedback would be nice..

http://soundcloud.com/user2316397/def-chris-call-the-cops

(press the big "play" button to stream)

[jimmybob]

Sounds like the music they play in dance clubs or motels.

Not bad thou.

-Jimmybob

[retrorussell]

I like it.  I feel it could maybe use another hook around the 1:30 or so mark as I think it would work well as a progressive kind of tune.  And I don't feel the vocals add much but that's just me.  Good rhythm.

[zombie no.one]

yeah it's pretty early stages...needs stuff adding to it. I've got a bunch of tracks on a similar style to this, none are finished.

thanks for dropping some feedback 

[dean]

Not bad as a first step!  Like retro said, it probably needs a touch more variety, but I liked what I heard so far [must admit I scanned through and listened to chunks rather than the whole thing.]

Btw what are you using to make this on?

[zombie no.one]

made using adobe audition (aka cool edit pro), which isnt very good. will be getting FL Studio soon which is a lot better.

thanks for having a listen

[Allhallowsday]

I like the groove; keep up the good work.   

[voltron]

good stuff dca. 

[zombie no.one]

cheers guys

when this is eventually finished I'll put it up as a free download.

[Vik]

Not bad