SHORT: Black Milk [Rough cut]

[dean]

Hey gangsters.  A few weeks ago I completed a short with a few friends and after making a rough cut, am busy making notes as to what changes, if any, need to be made to make it as neat and tidy as possible.  

For a project completed in one weekend, we're pretty happy with how it turned out, so to see if it has more potential, or more of a shelf life than 'just a fun project done in a weekend' I'd like to try and fix some of the issues [where possible/necessary] and just make it the best it can be, for what it is at least.  

I have a few notes already on what I'd like to do with it, so I'd be interested in seeing if others have the same thoughts.  Keep in mind that reshooting most likely isn't possible [especially since the lead actress is in New York at the moment] though some parts can be redone depending on what the caper is.

No need to hold back, I'm not precious, and I appreciate any feedback, positive and negative!


http://vimeo.com/18684952


Cheerio!

[dean]

Incidentally for those interested parties I make a brief cameo as the first victim; topless dean ftw! (or avert your eyes if it's too painful to see my 'acting')

[Trevor]

Incidentally for those interested parties I make a brief cameo as the first victim; topless dean ftw!

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Damn: I wish I could see that but my browser is blocked as far as things like Vimeo and Youtube go. 

[dean]

Come for the nips, stay for the clips!

[RD]

That was a fun short.  I like the little details like the barbie leg in her hair, and the patrons raising their mugs in unison. And good camera work! A lot of play with the Depth of Field.  Was shot with a 5D / 7D?

[dean]

Yeah 5D, though just as easily could've been the 7D.

Thanks for the comments!