WOW looks much better then half the crap that Troma distributes...
suggestions??? The short does look good but since this is a contest it best to pull out all the stops.
Add a cgi smoke effect from the back of the bazooka after shooting.
Maybe an open shirt or shirtless scene with the bazooka (likely towards the end of the clip)... I'll be good (or funnier) if Chips MacTavish's body isnt built although if he's built you should exploit it.
Maybe the girl in the car can hug or holding Chip's leg with a smoking hot bazooka.
Maybe a cgi effict of the bazooka growing.
Try to drag the short almost 2 minutes... :)
I'll try to think more...